Great work overall. However, some ways you could improve would be to proof-read, as some sentences are not written correctly. The middle panel with “Therapeutic Index/Window” should state that the dose is within this window. Your definition for TI is currently confusing, perhaps re-word and add an example? You’ve labelled the graph Fig 1 – should be 2, as you had the ed50/ld50 one before. You also need to refer to it, as right now it’s only referred to in passing in the last paragraph, I’m unsure whether you need the blue one above either, as it’s saying the same thing as the paragraph – I would keep one or the other.
I think the layout is really great and very engaging with the font and colors. I do think that at times you use passive language, so you should be cautious of that, as well as using some more colloquial language to simplify certain points. Overall, a really great job!
Hi Eva, I really like the layout of your blog. It is very colourful and eye catching. The use of different font sizes empathises the point that you want to drive across. Love the incorporation of stats into your topic. Overall, a very good job
Hi Eva, this is a very engaging blog with great pictures and references. Easy to read and there’s nothing really to improve upon, except maybe you could make the title more eye-catching. Nicely done!
Really well done Eva! I really tried to think of areas you could improve on but honestly couldn’t come up with any, haha. It was easy to understand througout and the images you added made it all the more interesting to look at. Great job 🙂
Hi Eva,
Great work overall. However, some ways you could improve would be to proof-read, as some sentences are not written correctly. The middle panel with “Therapeutic Index/Window” should state that the dose is within this window. Your definition for TI is currently confusing, perhaps re-word and add an example? You’ve labelled the graph Fig 1 – should be 2, as you had the ed50/ld50 one before. You also need to refer to it, as right now it’s only referred to in passing in the last paragraph, I’m unsure whether you need the blue one above either, as it’s saying the same thing as the paragraph – I would keep one or the other.
I think the layout is really great and very engaging with the font and colors. I do think that at times you use passive language, so you should be cautious of that, as well as using some more colloquial language to simplify certain points. Overall, a really great job!
Hi Eva, I really like the layout of your blog. It is very colourful and eye catching. The use of different font sizes empathises the point that you want to drive across. Love the incorporation of stats into your topic. Overall, a very good job
Hi Eva, this is a very engaging blog with great pictures and references. Easy to read and there’s nothing really to improve upon, except maybe you could make the title more eye-catching. Nicely done!
Really well done Eva! I really tried to think of areas you could improve on but honestly couldn’t come up with any, haha. It was easy to understand througout and the images you added made it all the more interesting to look at. Great job 🙂