Nice work!
A few things, in the title I think it should be, Where do the drugs go? ( instead of does)
I love all your questions and the way you have written it makes it easy to understand.
Another tip I think to make it even better would be to add some eye-catching photos? and maybe break up the big paragraphs on the second page as well. for example, put the malaria bit as its an example in a colourful box or something to break it up and make it moe pretty!!
Nice work though 🙂
Hi Samaha,
I agree with everything that has been said so far.
I just feel that your blog is missing the visual impact on the 2nd page. In the 2nd page, I felt you have lots of text and not many images/diagrams. Try to break the information down into more paragraphs/ or add boxes maybe, and try to add more self-explanatory diagrams. For example, you can have a picture of the bug that causes Malaria, just to engage the reader more.
Lastly, (this is just a suggestion), when you said that there are lots of textbooks to read about the volume of distribution, maybe you can have a mini list for the audience that contains names of books/articles they can use to read about the topic more.
Best of luck!
Good language use and fun to read. The diagrams are good but the calculations are wrong! It could be good to mention how Vd can be used in an overdose to calculate the quantity ingested. I think this is going to be a very good blog.
Hi Samaha, your blog is very colourful and informative. Very good introduction into the topic. The language is very suitable for a variety of audiences. It would be more engaging if there were more pictures on the second page. I love the colloquial language especially at the end of the blog. Very good job!
Great work, Samaha! The language is very friendly and inviting the readers to continue reading the rest of the blog. Good initiation on the first paragraph, they get the reader to be engaged with the rest of the blog. The 3 pictures, for pic. 2 and 3, I think you mean 2L and 5L? Maybe you could add some pictures on the second page in regards to malaria. Otherwise, great piece of work!
Hey Samaha!
Nice work!
A few things, in the title I think it should be, Where do the drugs go? ( instead of does)
I love all your questions and the way you have written it makes it easy to understand.
Another tip I think to make it even better would be to add some eye-catching photos? and maybe break up the big paragraphs on the second page as well. for example, put the malaria bit as its an example in a colourful box or something to break it up and make it moe pretty!!
Nice work though 🙂
Hi Samaha,
I agree with everything that has been said so far.
I just feel that your blog is missing the visual impact on the 2nd page. In the 2nd page, I felt you have lots of text and not many images/diagrams. Try to break the information down into more paragraphs/ or add boxes maybe, and try to add more self-explanatory diagrams. For example, you can have a picture of the bug that causes Malaria, just to engage the reader more.
Lastly, (this is just a suggestion), when you said that there are lots of textbooks to read about the volume of distribution, maybe you can have a mini list for the audience that contains names of books/articles they can use to read about the topic more.
Best of luck!
Good language use and fun to read. The diagrams are good but the calculations are wrong! It could be good to mention how Vd can be used in an overdose to calculate the quantity ingested. I think this is going to be a very good blog.
Hi Samaha, your blog is very colourful and informative. Very good introduction into the topic. The language is very suitable for a variety of audiences. It would be more engaging if there were more pictures on the second page. I love the colloquial language especially at the end of the blog. Very good job!
Great work, Samaha! The language is very friendly and inviting the readers to continue reading the rest of the blog. Good initiation on the first paragraph, they get the reader to be engaged with the rest of the blog. The 3 pictures, for pic. 2 and 3, I think you mean 2L and 5L? Maybe you could add some pictures on the second page in regards to malaria. Otherwise, great piece of work!