Thank you for the feedback! I’ll work on trimming the content to keep it concise while ensuring the main points shine through. Adding more images is a great idea to enhance visual engagement and complement the text. I’m glad the quote resonated—it’s always rewarding to see the intended effect come across effectively!
Hi Tahlia,
Love the title and the eye-catching photo. Really well written and I especially love the snapshot section!
I think the second page does have a lot of words. Maybe you can cut it down a little bit and add another photo?
Overall well done 🙂
Good info but I think you could use a cut down just a bit and add a few more images. Really do like the quote at the top as it does add emphasis on the situations that most people who just want to take that risk say and does definitely give the effect which you wanted.
Great stuff
Well-researched. Comprehensive info. Medical terminologies are defined in layman’s words. Clean lay-out.
Just one tiny bit to improve, please label Fig 1, Fig 2, Fig 3.
Hi Tahlia! I really liked your blog, I thought it was very easy to understand and engaging. The figures you’ve used really helped in getting your point across and very catch title!
Hey Tahlia,
Really engaging blog! Your language is conversationalist and perfect for the public audience without an understanding of pharmacology. The snapshot works really well as answering questions the reader may have come up with from the rest of your blog. The only thing I would recommend is to break up some of the paragraphs as it is quite a lot of text. Good job!
Hey Tahlia! I really liked your blog! The figures really help the reader to visualise what you’re discussing through your report. I thought it was very engaging and you covered all of the topic whilst also using great colloquial language!
Hi Tahlia, your blog is very engaging and informative. The diagrams drives your point across effectively. I think you did a wonderful job at answering any questions that expecting mothers would have if they drink on the daily basis. Great use of statistics to ‘wow’ the readers. Very good job.
Hi Tahlia! I think your blog is great! Very easy to understand, with good use of diagrams. Also, I like the Snapshot section, it gives a good summary to some questions that readers may want to know about. Although one suggestion would be to put a short description (only a sentence or 2) under the figures, in case readers were to just look at the figures. But overall, I think you did a great job!
Thank you for the feedback! I’ll work on trimming the content to keep it concise while ensuring the main points shine through. Adding more images is a great idea to enhance visual engagement and complement the text. I’m glad the quote resonated—it’s always rewarding to see the intended effect come across effectively!
Hi Tahlia,
Love the title and the eye-catching photo. Really well written and I especially love the snapshot section!
I think the second page does have a lot of words. Maybe you can cut it down a little bit and add another photo?
Overall well done 🙂
Good info but I think you could use a cut down just a bit and add a few more images. Really do like the quote at the top as it does add emphasis on the situations that most people who just want to take that risk say and does definitely give the effect which you wanted.
Great stuff
Well-researched. Comprehensive info. Medical terminologies are defined in layman’s words. Clean lay-out.
Just one tiny bit to improve, please label Fig 1, Fig 2, Fig 3.
Hi Tahlia! I really liked your blog, I thought it was very easy to understand and engaging. The figures you’ve used really helped in getting your point across and very catch title!
Hey Tahlia,
Really engaging blog! Your language is conversationalist and perfect for the public audience without an understanding of pharmacology. The snapshot works really well as answering questions the reader may have come up with from the rest of your blog. The only thing I would recommend is to break up some of the paragraphs as it is quite a lot of text. Good job!
Hey Tahlia! I really liked your blog! The figures really help the reader to visualise what you’re discussing through your report. I thought it was very engaging and you covered all of the topic whilst also using great colloquial language!
Hi Tahlia, your blog is very engaging and informative. The diagrams drives your point across effectively. I think you did a wonderful job at answering any questions that expecting mothers would have if they drink on the daily basis. Great use of statistics to ‘wow’ the readers. Very good job.
Hi Tahlia! I think your blog is great! Very easy to understand, with good use of diagrams. Also, I like the Snapshot section, it gives a good summary to some questions that readers may want to know about. Although one suggestion would be to put a short description (only a sentence or 2) under the figures, in case readers were to just look at the figures. But overall, I think you did a great job!