The writer provides clear, simple examples that make the subject easy to understand. The visuals support the content without distracting from the main ideas, and the tone remains light and engaging.
Good blog so far, but I agree with the others. The content could be arranged in a more colourful arrangement, and less chunky with the big paragraphs. Other than that, keep going!
Easy to read, great use of colloquial language and questions to engage the audience. I like the use of the table for the reversible, irreversible and non-competitive. A bit wordy and the paragraphs are a bit long. Especially the affinity and efficacy part. However overall a really nice blog. The jigsaw analogy made it interesting.
Honestly, I did not read through the “affinity and efficacy” as the paragraph was too big and put me off reading it but i enjoyed reading through the Biperiden section as it was interesting and new although I still recommend that information should be added. Good work on creating those diagrams but I think you can do improve it more detail. good luck.
Some parts are good but others need a bit of work. I’m not 100% convinced by the jigsaw analogy as the activation aspect doesn’t work. Drug absorption is rarely a receptor driven process (it’s mostly passive) so the start of the ‘affinity and efficacy’ section is confusing. All in all a good start though.
Hi Kieran, I like how you divided your information into sections using boxes as it makes it easier to read. The use of colloquial language makes your blog suitable for a variety of readers. You also explained all the ‘difficult’ words that a non-scientific reader would not normally know. Overall, very well done and the diagrams make learning about this easier.
Using the jigsaw analogy the whole way through the blog was really good. Probably the best use of an analogy I’ve seen out of all the blogs I’ve read. You simplified all the jargon
Just a few little things you may have overlooked, probably forgot to delete it but, you left a third page that’s blank.
Also just a few spelling mistakes which are both on the first page.
– “Think of when the last time was you swallowed a pill whenever a cold came down, or a tablet when hay fever season hit”
* I’d write it like this “Think of the last time you swallowed a pill” or you can change it to something else because the way it is now doesn’t make that much sense.
– “a drug will want to metabolise and adsorb”
* just spelt absorb wrong
The writer provides clear, simple examples that make the subject easy to understand. The visuals support the content without distracting from the main ideas, and the tone remains light and engaging.
Good blog so far, but I agree with the others. The content could be arranged in a more colourful arrangement, and less chunky with the big paragraphs. Other than that, keep going!
Easy to read, great use of colloquial language and questions to engage the audience. I like the use of the table for the reversible, irreversible and non-competitive. A bit wordy and the paragraphs are a bit long. Especially the affinity and efficacy part. However overall a really nice blog. The jigsaw analogy made it interesting.
Honestly, I did not read through the “affinity and efficacy” as the paragraph was too big and put me off reading it but i enjoyed reading through the Biperiden section as it was interesting and new although I still recommend that information should be added. Good work on creating those diagrams but I think you can do improve it more detail. good luck.
Some parts are good but others need a bit of work. I’m not 100% convinced by the jigsaw analogy as the activation aspect doesn’t work. Drug absorption is rarely a receptor driven process (it’s mostly passive) so the start of the ‘affinity and efficacy’ section is confusing. All in all a good start though.
Hi Kieran, I like how you divided your information into sections using boxes as it makes it easier to read. The use of colloquial language makes your blog suitable for a variety of readers. You also explained all the ‘difficult’ words that a non-scientific reader would not normally know. Overall, very well done and the diagrams make learning about this easier.
Using the jigsaw analogy the whole way through the blog was really good. Probably the best use of an analogy I’ve seen out of all the blogs I’ve read. You simplified all the jargon
Just a few little things you may have overlooked, probably forgot to delete it but, you left a third page that’s blank.
Also just a few spelling mistakes which are both on the first page.
– “Think of when the last time was you swallowed a pill whenever a cold came down, or a tablet when hay fever season hit”
* I’d write it like this “Think of the last time you swallowed a pill” or you can change it to something else because the way it is now doesn’t make that much sense.
– “a drug will want to metabolise and adsorb”
* just spelt absorb wrong