This blog reads a bit like a text book Mason so needs something to attract your attention and to keep you reading. Try and make it fun to read and interpret things in an interesting way. You have done all the research already. Add a good title and good headings and summarise the way these receptors are classified. The figures or images should add something to the text. Not all drugs target receptors what about enzyme inhibitors? Are nuclear receptors always found in the nucleus? Check with a lay person and find out what they don’t understand.
Hey, I really like this blog post and you have included really good research and information. You could work on an exciting title and maybe spread the text out a little bit as the large chunks of text may deter a reader. This could be done by spacing it into smaller paragraphs or making some key points into coloured text boxes in between chunks of info. Overall I think this is a successful draft.
Hi Mason,
I enjoyed reading your blog post. The choice of colour scheme was very appropriate and easy to read. The technical explanation of nuclear receptors is outstanding and very comprehensive. You have clearly demonstrated your knowledge of the topic. However I think you need to summarise the text a bit more and maybe add some more photos. It looks very crowded and sometimes is a bit exhausting to read.
This blog reads a bit like a text book Mason so needs something to attract your attention and to keep you reading. Try and make it fun to read and interpret things in an interesting way. You have done all the research already. Add a good title and good headings and summarise the way these receptors are classified. The figures or images should add something to the text. Not all drugs target receptors what about enzyme inhibitors? Are nuclear receptors always found in the nucleus? Check with a lay person and find out what they don’t understand.
Hey, I really like this blog post and you have included really good research and information. You could work on an exciting title and maybe spread the text out a little bit as the large chunks of text may deter a reader. This could be done by spacing it into smaller paragraphs or making some key points into coloured text boxes in between chunks of info. Overall I think this is a successful draft.
Hi Mason,
I enjoyed reading your blog post. The choice of colour scheme was very appropriate and easy to read. The technical explanation of nuclear receptors is outstanding and very comprehensive. You have clearly demonstrated your knowledge of the topic. However I think you need to summarise the text a bit more and maybe add some more photos. It looks very crowded and sometimes is a bit exhausting to read.