Your use of boxes to explain scientific terms is great – without them it would be difficult for a non-scientific audience to follow. Loved the lego! Maybe you could use those diagrams throughout instead of the chemical diagram to make the diagrams easier to follow. I think your article would also benefit from a conclusion statement that links back to your introduction – to make it more of an article rather than an explanation piece. Well done, it’s very good!
Hey Alexander,
Really good and informative blog! The layout breaks up the text really well, and your heading is very witty. It’s really catchy from the beginning and you maintain the conversational tone throughout. Your use of diagrams are great, well done!
Great article, it was very informative and well written but at the same time it maintained a conversational tone. Layout is great and pictures are well placed.
The use of colour and boxes helps the blog become eye catching and engaging! Nice job
Nice job! very articulate and to the point. you did well
Your use of boxes to explain scientific terms is great – without them it would be difficult for a non-scientific audience to follow. Loved the lego! Maybe you could use those diagrams throughout instead of the chemical diagram to make the diagrams easier to follow. I think your article would also benefit from a conclusion statement that links back to your introduction – to make it more of an article rather than an explanation piece. Well done, it’s very good!
Hey Alexander,
Really good and informative blog! The layout breaks up the text really well, and your heading is very witty. It’s really catchy from the beginning and you maintain the conversational tone throughout. Your use of diagrams are great, well done!
Great article, it was very informative and well written but at the same time it maintained a conversational tone. Layout is great and pictures are well placed.
The use of colour and boxes helps the blog become eye catching and engaging! Nice job
Nice job! very articulate and to the point. you did well