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Hi Ren,
I think the first paragrpah is great and the boxes makes it aethetically pleasing.
A few tips:If I remember the lecture correctly, I thought the highest risk of something happening to the baby if drinking alcohol is from drinking in the first few weeks? Maybe add that in after your first paragraph as both your title and your first paragraph talks about it but I did not see the immediate risk that can have on the baby. I did you mentioned 12 weeks, but maybe specifically when the risks really are.
Also to make your blog even more enticing to read, maybe have a picture that is more eye catching, maybe some colour? Photo with the black woman and red around it is a bit blurry.
Overall it is well written, good job 🙂
Your blog is really interesting and I enjoyed the beginning as it captured the attention of the reader and introduced the topic well. The layout is really clean and simple which is great and the content was easy to read and follow. The only real comment to make about the layout would be to maybe make the margins of the document a little smaller so that the space between the text boxes in the middle could be increased so that it isn’t so close together and to seperate the different sections more. But overall the blog is great!
Lovin’ the blog Ren. Well done with the opening to really reel in the reader. Has a good clickbait feel (not bad though). Well done.
Hey Ren
Good stuff on your blog. Nice structure and engaging language with an appropriate balanced use of images
Well-researched, credible resources, concise and comprehensive info, pictures are eye-catching, lay-out is clean.
You might want to alter the title a bit. Reader might think a girls’ night out is actually hamful. Emphasise that DRINKING during a girls’ night out does the damage.
Great work with your topic. Highly engaging and full of interesting facts. I really enjoyed how the information has been broken up, keeps the audience engaged and intrigued. Great layout, not cluttered, very easy on the eyes.
Awesome job with your blog, the way you wrote your information was engaging because it was easy to understand. The additional facts were also interesting , well done.
I love how you know exactly who your target audience is and cater it towards them! All information is relevant, and the layout is fantastic; especially love the bit in orange at the end to sum up what your point is. I might have to disagree on the box thing as it feels like I’m reading a fact sheet with different sections; wouldn’t mind the pictures and fun facts to be in boxes, but maybe that’s just my own personal preference. Also, maybe shorten the title so that it’s a bit more succinct and impactful? Apart from that, really loving this!
Hey Ren, I like how you separated the texts with boxes making it easier to follow through and not get overwhelmed with a wall of text. By starting the blog with an intriguing question it really makes the reader want to continue to read. Including the fun facts were fun, overall your blog is looking good.
Hi Ren, I enjoyed the tone of your writing and thought the introduction was extremely engaging. You went into depth when needed and stayed on the surface level where appropriate, making it relatable to virtually any reader of your blog. I loved the layout with the yellow borders as well, and thought the pictures you picked were diverse in colour and purpose and really effective. You did a wonderful job!
Calculus can be tough, and balancing it with other coursework is challenging. I turned for help with “do my calculus homework” https://domyessay.com/do-my-calculus-homework, and it was a lifesaver. The service provided clear, accurate solutions and detailed explanations that really helped me grasp complex concepts. The quality of work was excellent, and the support team was prompt and helpful. It’s great to have a reliable resource for tackling difficult problems.
Hi Ren,
I think the first paragrpah is great and the boxes makes it aethetically pleasing.
A few tips:If I remember the lecture correctly, I thought the highest risk of something happening to the baby if drinking alcohol is from drinking in the first few weeks? Maybe add that in after your first paragraph as both your title and your first paragraph talks about it but I did not see the immediate risk that can have on the baby. I did you mentioned 12 weeks, but maybe specifically when the risks really are.
Also to make your blog even more enticing to read, maybe have a picture that is more eye catching, maybe some colour? Photo with the black woman and red around it is a bit blurry.
Overall it is well written, good job 🙂
Your blog is really interesting and I enjoyed the beginning as it captured the attention of the reader and introduced the topic well. The layout is really clean and simple which is great and the content was easy to read and follow. The only real comment to make about the layout would be to maybe make the margins of the document a little smaller so that the space between the text boxes in the middle could be increased so that it isn’t so close together and to seperate the different sections more. But overall the blog is great!
Lovin’ the blog Ren. Well done with the opening to really reel in the reader. Has a good clickbait feel (not bad though). Well done.
Hey Ren
Good stuff on your blog. Nice structure and engaging language with an appropriate balanced use of images
Well-researched, credible resources, concise and comprehensive info, pictures are eye-catching, lay-out is clean.
You might want to alter the title a bit. Reader might think a girls’ night out is actually hamful. Emphasise that DRINKING during a girls’ night out does the damage.
Great work with your topic. Highly engaging and full of interesting facts. I really enjoyed how the information has been broken up, keeps the audience engaged and intrigued. Great layout, not cluttered, very easy on the eyes.
Awesome job with your blog, the way you wrote your information was engaging because it was easy to understand. The additional facts were also interesting , well done.
I love how you know exactly who your target audience is and cater it towards them! All information is relevant, and the layout is fantastic; especially love the bit in orange at the end to sum up what your point is. I might have to disagree on the box thing as it feels like I’m reading a fact sheet with different sections; wouldn’t mind the pictures and fun facts to be in boxes, but maybe that’s just my own personal preference. Also, maybe shorten the title so that it’s a bit more succinct and impactful? Apart from that, really loving this!
Hey Ren, I like how you separated the texts with boxes making it easier to follow through and not get overwhelmed with a wall of text. By starting the blog with an intriguing question it really makes the reader want to continue to read. Including the fun facts were fun, overall your blog is looking good.
Hi Ren, I enjoyed the tone of your writing and thought the introduction was extremely engaging. You went into depth when needed and stayed on the surface level where appropriate, making it relatable to virtually any reader of your blog. I loved the layout with the yellow borders as well, and thought the pictures you picked were diverse in colour and purpose and really effective. You did a wonderful job!