the start of this looks good it has potential but needs alot more info
Hi Muslimah! Very good draft of how you will layout your information. Good luck on the final submission!
Good looking draft so far Muslimah, understand it’s a draft so rememeber not to overcomplicate ideas and add a pop of colour or text boxes to break away from dense info paragraphs! Best of luck with your final submission 🙂
Your outline looks fine– I cannot give much feedback on the content/info since your blog is still developing.
You look like you have the right idea on how to execute a well explained blog. To make it more appealing I would suggest using colour and pictures which can also aid explaining the presented information.
Hi Muslimah,
Good start on the skeleton of your blog. Looks like you’ve got the right idea going on how to break up the text you will put in. Good luck with it!
Looks like you have all the important areas included in your draft to be able to effectively communication your topic on alcohol and pregnancy! Make sure your language is easy to follow and you engage your reader – this can be done by a catchy title or an engaging introduction. Good luck!
Hi Muslimah,
The structure is great, clearly there is lacking information because this is just a draft, however I would suggest having a catchy title, just to draw readers to the blog a lot more.
the start of this looks good it has potential but needs alot more info
Hi Muslimah! Very good draft of how you will layout your information. Good luck on the final submission!
Good looking draft so far Muslimah, understand it’s a draft so rememeber not to overcomplicate ideas and add a pop of colour or text boxes to break away from dense info paragraphs! Best of luck with your final submission 🙂
Your outline looks fine– I cannot give much feedback on the content/info since your blog is still developing.
You look like you have the right idea on how to execute a well explained blog. To make it more appealing I would suggest using colour and pictures which can also aid explaining the presented information.
Hi Muslimah,
Good start on the skeleton of your blog. Looks like you’ve got the right idea going on how to break up the text you will put in. Good luck with it!
Looks like you have all the important areas included in your draft to be able to effectively communication your topic on alcohol and pregnancy! Make sure your language is easy to follow and you engage your reader – this can be done by a catchy title or an engaging introduction. Good luck!
Hi Muslimah,
The structure is great, clearly there is lacking information because this is just a draft, however I would suggest having a catchy title, just to draw readers to the blog a lot more.