Hi Ana, I liked the whole post it note concept, the use of diagrams was great and you were able to link the information directly together. The lined paper with text did make it a little hard to read from a far but other then that, your blog was very interesting.
Hey,
love the layout, very quirky and appealing. How ever some of the diagrams are a bit too small and slightly hard to read. All the best with the assignment.
Hi Ana,
I love the way you have setout this blog, it is creative and something I haven’t seen with some of the other blogs I have read, so well done. Some minor gramatical errors within Phase one and some terms need to be defined. Just some suggestions, to avoid having to define some of these terms, e.g. blood brain barrier, bioactivation of a prodrug. you could say that “the drug can’t enter the brain unless it is converted to its active form in phase I”. Overall, your blog keeps the idea flowing well and relates back to the overall aim, which is what you want for a light read in a blog. Just some changes are required to make this blog really good and I wish you all the best with the final draft.
nice graphics! very engaging and to the point. I enjoyed reading your blog a lot 🙂
Hey Elijah, your blog looks awesome! You’ve made it really creative. You’ve got all the relevant content and have gone into great detail. Just don’t forget; we’re making this blog for people who don’t have a huge science background, so they might not know what the RER is, or ‘catabolism’, or oxidation, reduction, hydrolysis, or ‘non-microsomal’. So maybe find a way to explain them, or limit the amount of jargon you’re using.
Use of graphic design and the way it is layed out is easy to look at and read
Hi Ana, I liked the whole post it note concept, the use of diagrams was great and you were able to link the information directly together. The lined paper with text did make it a little hard to read from a far but other then that, your blog was very interesting.
Hey,
love the layout, very quirky and appealing. How ever some of the diagrams are a bit too small and slightly hard to read. All the best with the assignment.
Hi Ana,
I love the way you have setout this blog, it is creative and something I haven’t seen with some of the other blogs I have read, so well done. Some minor gramatical errors within Phase one and some terms need to be defined. Just some suggestions, to avoid having to define some of these terms, e.g. blood brain barrier, bioactivation of a prodrug. you could say that “the drug can’t enter the brain unless it is converted to its active form in phase I”. Overall, your blog keeps the idea flowing well and relates back to the overall aim, which is what you want for a light read in a blog. Just some changes are required to make this blog really good and I wish you all the best with the final draft.
nice graphics! very engaging and to the point. I enjoyed reading your blog a lot 🙂
Hey Elijah, your blog looks awesome! You’ve made it really creative. You’ve got all the relevant content and have gone into great detail. Just don’t forget; we’re making this blog for people who don’t have a huge science background, so they might not know what the RER is, or ‘catabolism’, or oxidation, reduction, hydrolysis, or ‘non-microsomal’. So maybe find a way to explain them, or limit the amount of jargon you’re using.
Use of graphic design and the way it is layed out is easy to look at and read