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Information on CYP has been well established and with minimal jargon, which is really easy to read without going to the science dictionary or text book for the definitions. Information could be spread out more to ease the readability but facts and grammer is well written.
For the figures, it could use a legend to support the text
Great start to your blog Liberty, you have some really good information in there, and its presented well. I’d suggest you find alternative sources for the “textbook” references so people who don’t have the text can still do some further reading. Some figure titles for your images would be great so we know what we are looking at.
Also don’t forget your blog post can be two pages plus references so you’ve got plenty of room to break up the text and make those pictures a bit bigger.
Hi Liberty! I would first like to commend you on your clever use of heading of the topic name followed by a pull-quote to draw the audiences in. You can enhance the attention of your audience further, as a suggestion, by writing a 2-3 sentence blurb under your heading about what you set out to achieve with this blog or a small fact about something this CYP450 enzyme (communicated in a general manner) unknown to the general eye.
I like your use of images to break up the white space between bodies of text. Some of my critique lies in your use of scientific jargon that may still require explaining. For example, the first content sentence requires the assumption of the reader to know what an endoplasmic reticulum is. Rather, as a suggestion, you can say “These foreign fighting guys are located in the ‘protein factories’ of your cells called the endoplasmic reticulum…”. Just be mindful of your language in catering to a general audience.
I understand that this is a draft and it looks like a clean slate but feel free to experiment with colours to really make your blog pop and stand out!
Overall, content wise keep up the good work. Solid foundation here. Best of Luck.
Hi there! You have a great title to your blog which really grabs the reader’s attention. To further enhance the layout of the blog, try to use different fonts for titles or different colours to make the reader want to read on as it does just look like an ordinary word document rather than a blog. Make sure to caption your images and also don’t forget to upload your final submission as a PDF file. The content is written well but could be a little bit simpler to read. Overall great information provided for the topic!
The title is engaging and the pictures work really well. Maybe add an analogy to help explain the process.
I like the use of images to break up your text. Makes the overall look of your blog a lot more inviting to the reader. The title is very engaging too. I know it’s hard because you’ve got quite a science heavy topic but I think the language you have used could be a little more conversational in nature to make it easier for the general public to read. Good luck!
Hi Liberty! I like your title because it really makes you click on your blog to see what these enzymes do. I agree with Dima because making it more website blog like (by adding banners etc) will make it look more engaging. I think you ran out of time but just in case: you should reference the textbook and the images like you’ve referenced everything else. With your genetic polymorphism example, you need to mention a positive effect rather than a negative effect (as stated in the Assignment Topics PDF). Good luck with your final blog! 🙂
Hello, you have made a good start so far, I like how you have used diverse and reliable sources. You can improve your blog by the use of coloured background or make it looks like a website blog. Also, add captions for the diagrams you have provided and try to engage the reader by using some examples. All the best.
Wrap yourself in timeless elegance with the Simone Biles Bears Sweater a classic choice that effortlessly merges sophistication and sportsmanship.
The Unisex Abercrombie Pullover Hoodie is an ideal combination of comfort and style. The fleece makes the garment very soft and warm. While the viscose lining inside will give smoothness and comfort. A hooded collar for extra protection and a pullover closure allow easy wear at any time.
The right maintenance is crucial throughout the winter. Wear a aka alpha kappa satin bomber jacket by to embrace warmth and style. Its plush fabric not only keeps you warm but also gives your winter ensemble a refined look.
Information on CYP has been well established and with minimal jargon, which is really easy to read without going to the science dictionary or text book for the definitions. Information could be spread out more to ease the readability but facts and grammer is well written.
For the figures, it could use a legend to support the text
Great start to your blog Liberty, you have some really good information in there, and its presented well. I’d suggest you find alternative sources for the “textbook” references so people who don’t have the text can still do some further reading. Some figure titles for your images would be great so we know what we are looking at.
Also don’t forget your blog post can be two pages plus references so you’ve got plenty of room to break up the text and make those pictures a bit bigger.
Hi Liberty! I would first like to commend you on your clever use of heading of the topic name followed by a pull-quote to draw the audiences in. You can enhance the attention of your audience further, as a suggestion, by writing a 2-3 sentence blurb under your heading about what you set out to achieve with this blog or a small fact about something this CYP450 enzyme (communicated in a general manner) unknown to the general eye.
I like your use of images to break up the white space between bodies of text. Some of my critique lies in your use of scientific jargon that may still require explaining. For example, the first content sentence requires the assumption of the reader to know what an endoplasmic reticulum is. Rather, as a suggestion, you can say “These foreign fighting guys are located in the ‘protein factories’ of your cells called the endoplasmic reticulum…”. Just be mindful of your language in catering to a general audience.
I understand that this is a draft and it looks like a clean slate but feel free to experiment with colours to really make your blog pop and stand out!
Overall, content wise keep up the good work. Solid foundation here. Best of Luck.
Hi there! You have a great title to your blog which really grabs the reader’s attention. To further enhance the layout of the blog, try to use different fonts for titles or different colours to make the reader want to read on as it does just look like an ordinary word document rather than a blog. Make sure to caption your images and also don’t forget to upload your final submission as a PDF file. The content is written well but could be a little bit simpler to read. Overall great information provided for the topic!
The title is engaging and the pictures work really well. Maybe add an analogy to help explain the process.
I like the use of images to break up your text. Makes the overall look of your blog a lot more inviting to the reader. The title is very engaging too. I know it’s hard because you’ve got quite a science heavy topic but I think the language you have used could be a little more conversational in nature to make it easier for the general public to read. Good luck!
Hi Liberty! I like your title because it really makes you click on your blog to see what these enzymes do. I agree with Dima because making it more website blog like (by adding banners etc) will make it look more engaging. I think you ran out of time but just in case: you should reference the textbook and the images like you’ve referenced everything else. With your genetic polymorphism example, you need to mention a positive effect rather than a negative effect (as stated in the Assignment Topics PDF). Good luck with your final blog! 🙂
Hello, you have made a good start so far, I like how you have used diverse and reliable sources. You can improve your blog by the use of coloured background or make it looks like a website blog. Also, add captions for the diagrams you have provided and try to engage the reader by using some examples. All the best.