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  • Дякую, цікаво. Ця вся інформація наче космос.

  • Thank you very much for this document, it helped me a lot! I will apply it to the sDFSDF website

  • The information you shared is very accurate, it gives me the knowledge that I need to learn. Thank you for sharing this useful information.
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  • very creative layout, however information could have been listed in a better way.

    also good use of visual aids.

  • Overall a good read but not a big fan of the colour contrast of grey text on green background, making it more personal would add more flow for the reader

  • Hi Elizabeth,

    I liked how you added pictures next to each species to help aid the reader, I would just like to add that make sure the numbers aren’t too close to the edge of the boxes. Also try and add more space between the paragraphs and ensure that all the text in each text box contains the same colour. Your description on the classification of snakes is good but make sure it doesn’t take up too much of space otherwise you will not have enough room for the rest of your information. I know this is just the draft but make sure to reference everything including the images.

    Good Luck!

  • The information is very informative and I like how each section has their own facts. However I think by adding spaces within the grey text box and removing the numbers might enable it to not look text heavy.

  • Your article is very informing and the colour is matching with the reptile theme, going easy on the eyes when reading. Adding in some humour or a great punchline relating to snakes could catch the audiences attention and that way the article won’t have an ‘essay feel’ to it, but as it is a draft, I’m sure the editing will be after you collect all your information. Your pictures are neat and of high quality, which makes it easier to learn the different classifications of the snakes.

  • good draft, and good choice of pictures and colours. I think you only need to expand you information and make your blog more informative. good luck

  • its a good start, ive noticed you dont have anything on the global problem on snakebites yet? and possibly some more info on elapid envenomation would be nice. i like how youve numbered and talked about the different families, maybe giving each family its own text box or something could help break it up and not make it look so bulky

  • Hi,

    I like the use of colored text boxes and the lay out but you might want to break up the text a bit more, its allot of content to have all in one big text box.

  • Hi Elizabeth,

    I like the style and layout of your blog, the only comment I have is to make the writing more engaging and interesting. Also, I think you need to make your blog longer as we are told to make it 2 pages.

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