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It’s a good blog and everything but the content seems to be hard to understand for the general public. I also feel there’s lots of writing inside the blog and which could be because of the small font size used but it does seem to be engaging which is a very good thing!
I would also maybe like to say include a reference list (don’t think there was one) but definitely a very engaging and informational read!
Hi Lisa!
I think overall your blog is looking good – its engaging and easy to read. Good use of separating out the concepts under different headings.
My comments for improvement are in regard to the equations, this is supposed to be pitched to the general public and it may seem a little difficult and dis-engaging. I also think the second page Is slightly over crowded, maybe try and really focus on the important things to get the concept across and leave more space for this (9 is a really small font size!!)
Other than that you layout seems really good – I like your use of colour, images and thought bubbles 🙂
I like it and thought it was well thought out and clear. I’m not sure if you need the equations however – do they really add to the understanding?
What is the pKa for this drug at pH 6?
Is a bit confusing since the pKa is independent of pH.
Hi Lisa,
overall very easy to understand, visually appealing, loved the way you introduced the test yourself questions so the reader can be engaged, just for your final submission convert your file to pdf.
Hi Lisa,
I liked the idea of you giving an example calculation for Henderson-Hasselbalch equation, I’ve seen very few people that actually worked it out for the rest of us to follow. Also liked the analogy, definitely makes it easier to remember.
And I definitely agree with the others the test yourself questions are a really good addition, no point reading along if we’re not going to learn anything from it.
Hi Lisa, I loved the way you laid out your blog with the blue heading backgrounds. Your writing was catchy and easy to follow, and the flow of the piece was to be commended. I loved the way you used the thought bubbles and the test yourself questions to break up the information.
I really liked the way you structured your blog – it is very visually appealing.
Just remember that you need to convert the file into a PDF file for the final submission; you have uploaded a word file for the draft.
I also think the ‘test yourself’ questions you have added is really smart and will help keep the reader engaged and understand the content better!
The only comment I might make is that it is a little overcrowded with text as the font is quite small and you have included alot of information, some of which I personally think is unnecessary (e.g. Henderson-Hasselbalch equation + calculations) as this blog post is designed for someone who has no idea about science!
But overall you did an amazing job
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It’s a good blog and everything but the content seems to be hard to understand for the general public. I also feel there’s lots of writing inside the blog and which could be because of the small font size used but it does seem to be engaging which is a very good thing!
I would also maybe like to say include a reference list (don’t think there was one) but definitely a very engaging and informational read!
Hi Lisa!
I think overall your blog is looking good – its engaging and easy to read. Good use of separating out the concepts under different headings.
My comments for improvement are in regard to the equations, this is supposed to be pitched to the general public and it may seem a little difficult and dis-engaging. I also think the second page Is slightly over crowded, maybe try and really focus on the important things to get the concept across and leave more space for this (9 is a really small font size!!)
Other than that you layout seems really good – I like your use of colour, images and thought bubbles 🙂
I like it and thought it was well thought out and clear. I’m not sure if you need the equations however – do they really add to the understanding?
What is the pKa for this drug at pH 6?
Is a bit confusing since the pKa is independent of pH.
Hi Lisa,
overall very easy to understand, visually appealing, loved the way you introduced the test yourself questions so the reader can be engaged, just for your final submission convert your file to pdf.
Hi Lisa,
I liked the idea of you giving an example calculation for Henderson-Hasselbalch equation, I’ve seen very few people that actually worked it out for the rest of us to follow. Also liked the analogy, definitely makes it easier to remember.
And I definitely agree with the others the test yourself questions are a really good addition, no point reading along if we’re not going to learn anything from it.
Hi Lisa, I loved the way you laid out your blog with the blue heading backgrounds. Your writing was catchy and easy to follow, and the flow of the piece was to be commended. I loved the way you used the thought bubbles and the test yourself questions to break up the information.
I really liked the way you structured your blog – it is very visually appealing.
Just remember that you need to convert the file into a PDF file for the final submission; you have uploaded a word file for the draft.
I also think the ‘test yourself’ questions you have added is really smart and will help keep the reader engaged and understand the content better!
The only comment I might make is that it is a little overcrowded with text as the font is quite small and you have included alot of information, some of which I personally think is unnecessary (e.g. Henderson-Hasselbalch equation + calculations) as this blog post is designed for someone who has no idea about science!
But overall you did an amazing job