9. Your article looks great – I like the layout. I think your language could benefit from being made more simple, especially on the second page. An example would be instead of saying, “paracetamol, caffeine, analgesics or benzodiazepines”, use the common names people will understand like “panadol, coffee etc.”. Some of your sentences are also quite long which make them a bit hard to follow. Overall, great job!
Very informative blog but maybe use less scientific jargon because it is a bit complex but otherwise great job.
9. Your article looks great – I like the layout. I think your language could benefit from being made more simple, especially on the second page. An example would be instead of saying, “paracetamol, caffeine, analgesics or benzodiazepines”, use the common names people will understand like “panadol, coffee etc.”. Some of your sentences are also quite long which make them a bit hard to follow. Overall, great job!
Very informative blog but maybe use less scientific jargon because it is a bit complex but otherwise great job.