It is clear to see that this draft is very much in its early stages. What I can commend is the presentation of the blog. I like the varied undertones of green which complement the topic of ‘drug toxicity’ very well. It is soft on the eyes complementing the black text on white background, making it appealing and minimalistic to the viewer. I can see that you have put an image in your left-hand side column. Please also note that you have to source your images in your references.
With regards to formatting, I can see that once it comes into completion everything will flow and be presented cohesively. Until then, much has to be done with regards to content in answering your designated questions. Additionally, I would provide 1-2 sentence(s) blurb underneath your topic heading to really capture your audience as a casual science reader. Pay close attention to your grammar and writing style, I can already see an incoherence in your language shown as ‘what are them’. If you overlook this it can greatly affect the quality of your work throughout.
Overall, good starting foundation with presentation and layout. Best of Luck.
There is a use of colour on the blog which is a good start to aim for a visually appealing presentation, however information was lacking which is hard to critique your work. Good start though as it looks like you know which direction to head off to.
Hi Victor,
The design and layout of your blog looks really good. Once you have included all the text and some images I think your blog will be looking great. SO far so good!
Current layout is visually appealing, however please ensure you pay close attention to english and grammar – such as “definition, what are them” should read “definition, what are they”. Apart from that, there isn’t much for me to say as it’s all empty.
Good luck.
The set out of your blog looks very appealing and easy to read. I can’t see any information written on there though? Remember to submit your final product as a PDF (as this is a word doc). Maybe you could edit the title to be more attention grabbing. This could be done by creating a story out of the article using an analogy, or using alliteration, or by creating an intruiging question for the heading. What you have got so far in terms of presentation is great.
It is clear to see that this draft is very much in its early stages. What I can commend is the presentation of the blog. I like the varied undertones of green which complement the topic of ‘drug toxicity’ very well. It is soft on the eyes complementing the black text on white background, making it appealing and minimalistic to the viewer. I can see that you have put an image in your left-hand side column. Please also note that you have to source your images in your references.
With regards to formatting, I can see that once it comes into completion everything will flow and be presented cohesively. Until then, much has to be done with regards to content in answering your designated questions. Additionally, I would provide 1-2 sentence(s) blurb underneath your topic heading to really capture your audience as a casual science reader. Pay close attention to your grammar and writing style, I can already see an incoherence in your language shown as ‘what are them’. If you overlook this it can greatly affect the quality of your work throughout.
Overall, good starting foundation with presentation and layout. Best of Luck.
There is a use of colour on the blog which is a good start to aim for a visually appealing presentation, however information was lacking which is hard to critique your work. Good start though as it looks like you know which direction to head off to.
Hi Victor,
The design and layout of your blog looks really good. Once you have included all the text and some images I think your blog will be looking great. SO far so good!
Current layout is visually appealing, however please ensure you pay close attention to english and grammar – such as “definition, what are them” should read “definition, what are they”. Apart from that, there isn’t much for me to say as it’s all empty.
Good luck.
The set out of your blog looks very appealing and easy to read. I can’t see any information written on there though? Remember to submit your final product as a PDF (as this is a word doc). Maybe you could edit the title to be more attention grabbing. This could be done by creating a story out of the article using an analogy, or using alliteration, or by creating an intruiging question for the heading. What you have got so far in terms of presentation is great.