Wow, this is a great blog. Everything is presented in a clear and beautiful way. I appreciate your smash karts designs. Great job!
Really easy to read in terms of your writing style, which is really good and engaging, but at the same time it does drag on for a little bit so maybe reduce some words or create more succinct paragraphs. Otherwise, the information and resources are great.
Hi Elijah
I like the images you’ve used on your blog, particularly the DNA molecule at the very top, however there is a lot of writing so I would try break it down and stick to the 2 page limit
your blog was not bad it shined light on areas which I was not aware of and was very engaging. it was a bit long and I was a bit confused about your lack of references but aside from that you hit the nail on the head!
Hey Elijah
Great blog, the language is in a popular style and its easy to understand the concepts that are being presented. I would say that you don’t need to add any more info than you’ve already got. Also I know its only a draft but you should design the layout to look more like a blog or a popular science article instead of an essay.
Great job!
Hi Elijah,
Straight away my attention was caught by the dark blue colour and large DNA picture, which is really good. The content is very good, but maybe for the ease of reading, break up the long paragraphs, or include subheadings. The blog is a little long (has to be 2 pages), but you have a week to break it down a little, so your on the right path! Good blog otherwise!
Wow, this is a great blog. Everything is presented in a clear and beautiful way. I appreciate your smash karts designs. Great job!
Really easy to read in terms of your writing style, which is really good and engaging, but at the same time it does drag on for a little bit so maybe reduce some words or create more succinct paragraphs. Otherwise, the information and resources are great.
Hi Elijah
I like the images you’ve used on your blog, particularly the DNA molecule at the very top, however there is a lot of writing so I would try break it down and stick to the 2 page limit
your blog was not bad it shined light on areas which I was not aware of and was very engaging. it was a bit long and I was a bit confused about your lack of references but aside from that you hit the nail on the head!
Hey Elijah
Great blog, the language is in a popular style and its easy to understand the concepts that are being presented. I would say that you don’t need to add any more info than you’ve already got. Also I know its only a draft but you should design the layout to look more like a blog or a popular science article instead of an essay.
Great job!
Hi Elijah,
Straight away my attention was caught by the dark blue colour and large DNA picture, which is really good. The content is very good, but maybe for the ease of reading, break up the long paragraphs, or include subheadings. The blog is a little long (has to be 2 pages), but you have a week to break it down a little, so your on the right path! Good blog otherwise!