I love the secret agent analogy too as mentioned by others – it makes the complex concept a lot easier to understand! your diagram is also really good and helps make it clear! maybe adding in subtitles in the body of text would help break it up a little! But overall its really good and I like the formatting! 🙂
Hi Samantha, I loved how you stuck with the secret agent analogy the whole way through, I thought that was really effective at simplifying the topic for a reader of non-scientific background. I loved that you made your own diagram for the process as well! Only thing I would probably say is the font is a bit small and I think it would be more engaging if you could break up all the text with some headings or a few more pictures. But overall you did an amazing job (:
Hey Samantha, the work seems very nice overall. However, this draft could have been much more better if you used more pharmacological principles in relation to the topic as there are plenty. And the pictures u provided could be better if u labelled everything in the pictures. Such as the cell wall it is not labelled. The sites where the protein is used could have been much more better
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I thought that was really great. I really appreciate the effort that it took to provide such an accurate and detailed overview. The background is probably just a bit dark. Could possibly be changed a bit to make it more lay reader friendly but it’s great as it is.
Hello, the on-going secret agent analogy is great and I like how important terms are written in bold (albeit a bit overdone). The diagrams are also a nice touch to help the reader understand GPCR mechanisms better. However I feel like GDP/GTP could be better explained to the lay reader, and the use of sub-titles to break up sections of the blog would make it easier to read. Good research and effort!
Hi Samantha, good work! I enjoy the constant process of the receptors in a panel down the right side of the page to follow using labels with the diagrams. However, I feel it is a little bit jarring with a constant wall of text down the middle without any sub-headings to give a break to the eyes. Other than that, good analogy with the spy and good thorough explanation of the topic. Well done =]
I love the secret agent analogy too as mentioned by others – it makes the complex concept a lot easier to understand! your diagram is also really good and helps make it clear! maybe adding in subtitles in the body of text would help break it up a little! But overall its really good and I like the formatting! 🙂
Hi Samantha, I loved how you stuck with the secret agent analogy the whole way through, I thought that was really effective at simplifying the topic for a reader of non-scientific background. I loved that you made your own diagram for the process as well! Only thing I would probably say is the font is a bit small and I think it would be more engaging if you could break up all the text with some headings or a few more pictures. But overall you did an amazing job (:
Hey Samantha, the work seems very nice overall. However, this draft could have been much more better if you used more pharmacological principles in relation to the topic as there are plenty. And the pictures u provided could be better if u labelled everything in the pictures. Such as the cell wall it is not labelled. The sites where the protein is used could have been much more better
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I thought that was really great. I really appreciate the effort that it took to provide such an accurate and detailed overview. The background is probably just a bit dark. Could possibly be changed a bit to make it more lay reader friendly but it’s great as it is.
Hello, the on-going secret agent analogy is great and I like how important terms are written in bold (albeit a bit overdone). The diagrams are also a nice touch to help the reader understand GPCR mechanisms better. However I feel like GDP/GTP could be better explained to the lay reader, and the use of sub-titles to break up sections of the blog would make it easier to read. Good research and effort!
Hi Samantha, good work! I enjoy the constant process of the receptors in a panel down the right side of the page to follow using labels with the diagrams. However, I feel it is a little bit jarring with a constant wall of text down the middle without any sub-headings to give a break to the eyes. Other than that, good analogy with the spy and good thorough explanation of the topic. Well done =]