Hi Bethany,
Well researched blog, also like the analogy.
Only minor comment would be missing some overall info about other insecticides – as per the dot point “How are insecticides classified?”
Thoroughly enjoyed your blog. It was pretty straight-forward and easy to understand. The Traffic analogy was well thought out and explained. Definitely made the complicated ACh system easier to follow. I also liked the Facts you added throughout the blog. Gives the reader the chance to take a short break, while they digest the more complex information.
Overall, Great job!
Hi Bethany,
I really enjoyed reading your blog. It is engaging throughout and delivers a lot of useful information to the reader. However, it can be a little technical at times, for example your example of an organophosphate chemical drawing may be a little complex for the average non-science educated reader.
I would recommend using a different diagram for your explanation or perhaps draw your own chemical structure that is less ‘sciency’.
Overall, it is really well formatted with good analogies, and good information.
Hi,
First, the blog looks well organised. Although it contains a lot of complex information, you are able to keep it simple. For example, the analog that you used to describe the functioning of insecticide is brilliant.
Hi Bethany,
Well researched blog, also like the analogy.
Only minor comment would be missing some overall info about other insecticides – as per the dot point “How are insecticides classified?”
Thoroughly enjoyed your blog. It was pretty straight-forward and easy to understand. The Traffic analogy was well thought out and explained. Definitely made the complicated ACh system easier to follow. I also liked the Facts you added throughout the blog. Gives the reader the chance to take a short break, while they digest the more complex information.
Overall, Great job!
Hi Bethany,
I really enjoyed reading your blog. It is engaging throughout and delivers a lot of useful information to the reader. However, it can be a little technical at times, for example your example of an organophosphate chemical drawing may be a little complex for the average non-science educated reader.
I would recommend using a different diagram for your explanation or perhaps draw your own chemical structure that is less ‘sciency’.
Overall, it is really well formatted with good analogies, and good information.
Hi,
First, the blog looks well organised. Although it contains a lot of complex information, you are able to keep it simple. For example, the analog that you used to describe the functioning of insecticide is brilliant.