Very appealing blog! All information is easy to understand and matches the blog style of writing. For me some of the pictures are blurry so not sure if this is the case?, and adding captions/figures would link the text to the pictures (compliment each other). Great work!
Hi Nicole,
I agree with everyone here. The title, format and structure are the highlight of this blog. Excellent colour scheme used. I really like how you have a separate section for subcutaneous and intramuscular injection. Great visual images used however, you can add captions to the appropriate images. The blog is very well written and it follows the conversational tone hence, the blog flows well and it is easy to understand.
Solid draft! I know you still have references left. so, don’t forget to cite them in the text as well.
Good luck for the final blog:)
Really like your layout, text is broken up well with lots of subheadings and pictures. Id suggest explaining all of the concepts you talk about as you have only done this for some terms. Additionally, ensure you proof read as some of your sentences don’t make complete sense
Hi Nicole,
I agree, great title and layout. You’ll need to proof-read the blog, there are some sentences which sound incomplete. I know you mentioned no reference list but please don’t forget to do in text references where ever it is appropriate and provide a clean looking reference style, preferably UTS Harvard style as the UTS library website provides instructions on how to write them.
There some improper use of colloquialism, even for a blog targeted at the general public, for example you say that insulin is for “both types of diabetes”, there are many different types of diabetes. As mentioned earlier, do use figure legends for chemical or scientific images as the reader will not know what they are looking at, and keep the images relevant to the information provided in your blog.
Great blog draft nonetheless!
Great title and colour scheme! The use of the column on the right hand side explaining the difference between intramuscular and subcutaneous injection was a good addition, as is your use of puns.
In your first paragraph, you’ve mentioned first past metabolism but haven’t explained what it is. On your second page you’ve included a structural formula – I am guessing it is of epinephrine, maybe include a label or explanation!
For your final submission, just remember to include in text referencing throughout! Other than that, great blog!
First of all, Iconic title. It is visually very appealing and it covers the topics well. I think you should revise the first page paragraph as some words appear to be missing causes sentences to not read well. Also, a clearer initial explanation of first pass metabolism would make the idea of why injections are required more cohesive. This blog would benefit from shortening some sentences and writing in a more conversational style. It’s important to reference as you go rather than leave it til the end. Good job
Very appealing blog! All information is easy to understand and matches the blog style of writing. For me some of the pictures are blurry so not sure if this is the case?, and adding captions/figures would link the text to the pictures (compliment each other). Great work!
Hi Nicole,
I agree with everyone here. The title, format and structure are the highlight of this blog. Excellent colour scheme used. I really like how you have a separate section for subcutaneous and intramuscular injection. Great visual images used however, you can add captions to the appropriate images. The blog is very well written and it follows the conversational tone hence, the blog flows well and it is easy to understand.
Solid draft! I know you still have references left. so, don’t forget to cite them in the text as well.
Good luck for the final blog:)
Really like your layout, text is broken up well with lots of subheadings and pictures. Id suggest explaining all of the concepts you talk about as you have only done this for some terms. Additionally, ensure you proof read as some of your sentences don’t make complete sense
Hi Nicole,
I agree, great title and layout. You’ll need to proof-read the blog, there are some sentences which sound incomplete. I know you mentioned no reference list but please don’t forget to do in text references where ever it is appropriate and provide a clean looking reference style, preferably UTS Harvard style as the UTS library website provides instructions on how to write them.
There some improper use of colloquialism, even for a blog targeted at the general public, for example you say that insulin is for “both types of diabetes”, there are many different types of diabetes. As mentioned earlier, do use figure legends for chemical or scientific images as the reader will not know what they are looking at, and keep the images relevant to the information provided in your blog.
Great blog draft nonetheless!
Great title and colour scheme! The use of the column on the right hand side explaining the difference between intramuscular and subcutaneous injection was a good addition, as is your use of puns.
In your first paragraph, you’ve mentioned first past metabolism but haven’t explained what it is. On your second page you’ve included a structural formula – I am guessing it is of epinephrine, maybe include a label or explanation!
For your final submission, just remember to include in text referencing throughout! Other than that, great blog!
First of all, Iconic title. It is visually very appealing and it covers the topics well. I think you should revise the first page paragraph as some words appear to be missing causes sentences to not read well. Also, a clearer initial explanation of first pass metabolism would make the idea of why injections are required more cohesive. This blog would benefit from shortening some sentences and writing in a more conversational style. It’s important to reference as you go rather than leave it til the end. Good job