Great effort, minor comments such as misalignment of images and text – particularly column on right. Also, there are a lot of words at the moment, could be a bit more simplified. Also like your analogy! It made me chuckle.
Great use of subheadings to break up the information. The information flows very well and is engaging. Great pictures and diagrams
Your diagrams are really good. Great analogy with the party, really helps you communicate your point. In the paragraph, ‘Why do I care, you ask’, I think the “(intro to pest problem)” is from your drafting process, and do you mean “distributed” instead of “distrusted”? I also think your article feels unfinished with the way it ends – it would benefit from a definite conclusion to link back to your introduction + the overall pest problem. Otherwise, a great article!
Great work, very informative and interesting to read. You might get marked down for too much text.
Hi Sarah,
Great effort, minor comments such as misalignment of images and text – particularly column on right. Also, there are a lot of words at the moment, could be a bit more simplified. Also like your analogy! It made me chuckle.
Great use of subheadings to break up the information. The information flows very well and is engaging. Great pictures and diagrams
Your diagrams are really good. Great analogy with the party, really helps you communicate your point. In the paragraph, ‘Why do I care, you ask’, I think the “(intro to pest problem)” is from your drafting process, and do you mean “distributed” instead of “distrusted”? I also think your article feels unfinished with the way it ends – it would benefit from a definite conclusion to link back to your introduction + the overall pest problem. Otherwise, a great article!
Great work, very informative and interesting to read. You might get marked down for too much text.