Excellent visuals and great job with the minimalist style box listings that do not overcrowd/ overwhelm the data already present on the page. The information you have provided is detailed and easy enough to engage audiences of a multitude of backgrounds.My only suggestions would be perhaps to add more images of teratogens or associated diseases that are not too confronting to the younger reader.
Overall, very engaging piece and easy to understand. Well done
Hi Bianca, good job on the title, very catching and engaging. I really like how you have broken the information, it flows really well. I agree with other people that casual tone writing would aid your blog.
Hi Bianca. I really like the layout of the blog, it is really easy on the eyes and very colourful. I love how you separated your information as it makes it very easy to read and follow. Good job overall.
Hi Bianca! I enjoy the layout of your blog which is clean and very well presented and the title is great as it is able to really reel in a reader. You have provided good simplified information that is very easy to read, but as said before, try to make it a little bit more conversational to keep the reader engaged. A suggestion would be to add more relevant images i.e. possibly the different abnormalities? – just to give a visual insight into what teratogens can really do.
Great information provided and simplified well. However, agreeing with the above comments, some tweaking of the layout and a more conversational tone would improve the blog greatly. Just keeping in mind your audience should do the trick!
Really good breakdown of the information, very easy to follow and understand. Like others have said, try to make it more conversational and less formal.
Hello Bianca, I agree with some of Rafal’s comments. It is a very nice looking blog, but it seems like a little bit of a fact sheet, I think if you make the text a little bit more enjoyable to read, it would be a great blog! To help, maybe include some analogies and language that engages a casual reader on the internet.
Good work! =]
Hi Bianca,
I like the presentation of your blog. However, I think it is slightly not engaging and you just summarised information and facts. It feels like it is an information report rather than a blog. Try to add a more engaging intro and subtitles (especially in the 2nd page). You can also add more explanatory diagrams and figures to draw the reader’s attention.
Hi Bianca,
Excellent visuals and great job with the minimalist style box listings that do not overcrowd/ overwhelm the data already present on the page. The information you have provided is detailed and easy enough to engage audiences of a multitude of backgrounds.My only suggestions would be perhaps to add more images of teratogens or associated diseases that are not too confronting to the younger reader.
Overall, very engaging piece and easy to understand. Well done
Hi Bianca, good job on the title, very catching and engaging. I really like how you have broken the information, it flows really well. I agree with other people that casual tone writing would aid your blog.
Hi Bianca. I really like the layout of the blog, it is really easy on the eyes and very colourful. I love how you separated your information as it makes it very easy to read and follow. Good job overall.
Hi Bianca! I enjoy the layout of your blog which is clean and very well presented and the title is great as it is able to really reel in a reader. You have provided good simplified information that is very easy to read, but as said before, try to make it a little bit more conversational to keep the reader engaged. A suggestion would be to add more relevant images i.e. possibly the different abnormalities? – just to give a visual insight into what teratogens can really do.
Great information provided and simplified well. However, agreeing with the above comments, some tweaking of the layout and a more conversational tone would improve the blog greatly. Just keeping in mind your audience should do the trick!
Really good breakdown of the information, very easy to follow and understand. Like others have said, try to make it more conversational and less formal.
Hello Bianca, I agree with some of Rafal’s comments. It is a very nice looking blog, but it seems like a little bit of a fact sheet, I think if you make the text a little bit more enjoyable to read, it would be a great blog! To help, maybe include some analogies and language that engages a casual reader on the internet.
Good work! =]
Hi Bianca,
I like the presentation of your blog. However, I think it is slightly not engaging and you just summarised information and facts. It feels like it is an information report rather than a blog. Try to add a more engaging intro and subtitles (especially in the 2nd page). You can also add more explanatory diagrams and figures to draw the reader’s attention.