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Hi Hussein,
I really like the layout of your blog! I especially like how you included the healthy tips at the end. It was very informative and enjoyable to read. Good work overall!
Great information, lots of relevant facts and content. My feedback echos the others, as more colour and more breaks in the content would allow for a more enjoyable reading experience. But other than that, the information is interesting and overall is on the right track!
Hi Hussein,
I think your draft is looking good! Its easy to read and engaging. My suggestions for improvement would to to add in a bit more of an introduction to grab the readers attention, maybe put your statistic here and really highlight the importance of teratogens in birth defects. Also, For the drugs section, you should try and link your text more to the diagram you have provided. I think my main feedback would be in regard to the layout – try to use more colour and maybe larger fonts for the different sub-headings. some of your images are a bit distorted, this could also be improved.
Overall a good start, only some minor improvements needed!
Hi Hussein,
Nice draft so far. I think your blog is easy to understand and is informative. However, I think it would benefit to add some colour to grab the readers vision and format your text and images to fit within borders to fill out the pages more appropriately while adding some figure labels to some of the images which may require a little bit of an explanation. Oh, and also make sure you add your references. Good work!
Playing tomb of the mask helps me relieve stress. You can try it.
Hi Hussein,
I really like the layout of your blog! I especially like how you included the healthy tips at the end. It was very informative and enjoyable to read. Good work overall!
Great information, lots of relevant facts and content. My feedback echos the others, as more colour and more breaks in the content would allow for a more enjoyable reading experience. But other than that, the information is interesting and overall is on the right track!
Hi Hussein,
I think your draft is looking good! Its easy to read and engaging. My suggestions for improvement would to to add in a bit more of an introduction to grab the readers attention, maybe put your statistic here and really highlight the importance of teratogens in birth defects. Also, For the drugs section, you should try and link your text more to the diagram you have provided. I think my main feedback would be in regard to the layout – try to use more colour and maybe larger fonts for the different sub-headings. some of your images are a bit distorted, this could also be improved.
Overall a good start, only some minor improvements needed!
Hi Hussein,
Nice draft so far. I think your blog is easy to understand and is informative. However, I think it would benefit to add some colour to grab the readers vision and format your text and images to fit within borders to fill out the pages more appropriately while adding some figure labels to some of the images which may require a little bit of an explanation. Oh, and also make sure you add your references. Good work!