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  • Hi, your blog was informative and easy to understand however, try make it more engaging and in a more conversational tone for the reader. Try cutting down the scientific jargon or maybe define what it is. Great work by the way!

  • Your blog seems to be really good. Good information, use of images and the components that you have spoken about are broken up well and make it easy to read which is really good. Adding a short description underneath some of the diagrams and images might make the blog a little better. Really good job overall, keep up the good work!

  • Really informative article with in depth information but I think it may be a bit too long. Also, if you could make it sound a bit more conversational then your article would be even better.

  • It was a riveting article and I especially loved the picture of the angry liver that was golden. Your blog was a little long but very informative. Great job 🙂

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