Hi, blog is looking good
The flow of your blog is great and all information is communicated well to the reader.
I would however add in references to your images and possibly cut down on text, this could be simply done through layout and position of images.
The basic ingredients are all here but I thought that the language was a bit awkward in places and it could be made a bit more readable. The original definition of Vd doesn’t really make sense to me. You discuss the Vd being related to body weight but show a diagram of changing body composition . Not sure if all your references are all reliable.
Hi Elias,
Great title and opening paragraph – very engaging and easy to understand.
I think the photos you have used are great as well as the flowchart, but maybe make them a bit bigger and try to use a bit less text.
I think especially the second page the way it looks with so much text makes it a bit daunting for a reader to actually read it, so maybe try cut possibly some of the examples out and add some more colour to your blog. But overall nice work 🙂
The use of rhetorical question in the beginning is a great way to engage the reader, although the wordering is a little awkward at times. The concepts are explained well and the diagrams help to solidify the idea. Maybe adding a title/brief explanation under them may help to link them to the information they are explaining. The real life example is great, although quite lengthy.
Hey Elias! Just a few things,
– your first paragraph assumes your audience is familar with kinetic concepts. That, unfortunately, is untrue
– some sentences are a bit lengthy, which loses a reader’s interest or may cause a bit of confusion
– each section is broken down with a diagram, perhaps your concluding paragraph could also include something?
Really good job so far though!
The concepts are greatly explained and there might be a lot of text to read through making it not so much engaging to read. either then that great blog
Hi Elias, great blog!
I really like the use of diagrams throughout the blog.
I think that the formatting could be slightly more consistent in order to make the blog more visually appealing.
Great work!
Hey Elias, Great blog you’ve done well to explain the concept fully. I think it could be broken up a little bit more there is a lot of text. Perhaps the questions that you have in text can be made into headings and then work from there? Just an idea. But all over really good 🙂
Hi, blog is looking good
The flow of your blog is great and all information is communicated well to the reader.
I would however add in references to your images and possibly cut down on text, this could be simply done through layout and position of images.
The basic ingredients are all here but I thought that the language was a bit awkward in places and it could be made a bit more readable. The original definition of Vd doesn’t really make sense to me. You discuss the Vd being related to body weight but show a diagram of changing body composition . Not sure if all your references are all reliable.
Hi Elias,
Great title and opening paragraph – very engaging and easy to understand.
I think the photos you have used are great as well as the flowchart, but maybe make them a bit bigger and try to use a bit less text.
I think especially the second page the way it looks with so much text makes it a bit daunting for a reader to actually read it, so maybe try cut possibly some of the examples out and add some more colour to your blog. But overall nice work 🙂
The use of rhetorical question in the beginning is a great way to engage the reader, although the wordering is a little awkward at times. The concepts are explained well and the diagrams help to solidify the idea. Maybe adding a title/brief explanation under them may help to link them to the information they are explaining. The real life example is great, although quite lengthy.
Hey Elias! Just a few things,
– your first paragraph assumes your audience is familar with kinetic concepts. That, unfortunately, is untrue
– some sentences are a bit lengthy, which loses a reader’s interest or may cause a bit of confusion
– each section is broken down with a diagram, perhaps your concluding paragraph could also include something?
Really good job so far though!
The concepts are greatly explained and there might be a lot of text to read through making it not so much engaging to read. either then that great blog
Hi Elias, great blog!
I really like the use of diagrams throughout the blog.
I think that the formatting could be slightly more consistent in order to make the blog more visually appealing.
Great work!
Hey Elias, Great blog you’ve done well to explain the concept fully. I think it could be broken up a little bit more there is a lot of text. Perhaps the questions that you have in text can be made into headings and then work from there? Just an idea. But all over really good 🙂