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  • يسهل العثور على بعض التسريبات والعثور عليها ، بينما يحتاج البعض الآخر إلى متخصص للعثور عليها وإصلاحها
    في حالة خزان المياه ، يتم إجراء فحص التسرب عن طريق توصيل صمام الكشف بالفلتر مباشرة
    في حالة المرحاض ، يتم الكشف عن ذلك عن طريق إزالة الجزء العلوي من الخزان والاستماع إلى التسرب لتحديد موقعه
    كشف تسربات المياه عن طريق فحص صمامات المياه في منزلك. عادة ما يحتوي كل منزل على صمام مياه في بداية الأنبوب ونهايته. ما عليك سوى العثور على الصمام والاستماع بعناية لصوت الصفير لتحديده. هل توجد تسريبات؟
    غالبًا ما يتم اكتشاف التسريبات الكبيرة أو مجموعات التسريبات الصغيرة بواسطة عدادات المياه
    يمكنك استخدام عداد المياه الخاص بك لإجراء فحص بسيط للتسرب باتباع الخطوات التالية
    أولاً ، تأكد من إيقاف تشغيل وإغلاق جميع المياه داخل المنزل وخارجه ، ويتم إجراء هذا الاختبار باستخدام أجهزة الكشف التلقائي مثل أجهزة التحكم في الري وغسالات الملابس وغسالات الصحون مطفأة
    يتم تسجيل قراءات عداد المياه كل 15 دقيقة لضمان عدم التغيير وعدم استخدام المياه خلال هذا الوقت ويتم تسجيل القراءات مرة أخرى
    إذا كان العداد يسجل استخدام المياه أثناء الاختبار ، فقد يكون السبب هو التسرب
    تأكد من عدم استخدام المياه في الأجهزة الصغيرة مثل أجهزة تنقية المياه أو أجهزة تنقية المياه أو أجهزة ترطيب المنزل بالكامل
    يهدف هذا الاختبار إلى تأكيد وجود تسربات مرئية كبيرة تؤثر بشدة على قراءة العداد ولكنها غير صالحة للاستعمال وغير مجدية للتسربات الصغيرة في المنزل ولا تشير إلى مكان التسرب وتتطلب شركة محترفة للكشف وتحديد مكان التسرب

    كشف تسربات المياه بجازان

  • I quite like your writing style, it made for an enjoyable read. I found that the information was really good, but it might be hard to understand for audiences with a limited scientific background. Otherwise I think this is a good blog, I especially like that figure 2, it really helped me understand what was going on.

  • The scenario and questions as the topic markers make this enjoyable to read. The information is also informative and humorous. I think adding more images or by changing some of the scientific jargon, it would make it a bit more easier to understand by the general public.

  • Good work on this article.
    I like the creative beginning and how it captures the audiences attention. I’m not sure if it was unintentional or it was meant to be a joke at the ‘Are you willing to find out the consequences? if not, read on’ part, but it was quite humourous. The flow of the information is concise and defines the scientific terms well (when used).
    There’s a lot of text in first aid section, maybe splitting it with another image could make it easy on the eyes and give it a more blog like feel.
    Apart from that, you’ve done a really good job.
    Good luck!

  • Hi Giorgio,
    Your blog is informative and your writing is very engaging. The layout is clean and you used bright colours and images. The only thing I would suggest is reducing the text to make the layout more organised. good luck

  • Very informative blog, although those without a science background may struggle to understand parts. Maybe some simplification of the scientific jargon or the use of analogies here and there. I really like the layout, but maybe a bit more colour might spruce things up a bit. Great work!

  • I really enjoyed the angle you took this blog, was a very enjoyable read, definitely need to simplify and reword some sentences in order to be more appealing to the average reader

  • Great Job with your blog! You did well by catching the audiences attention by addressing us personally in the scenario of being bitten. I do agree with previous comments that at times, terms are too scientific (e.g talking about pre-synaptic and post-synaptic effects on neurons) but overall you do well to explain things and get a good message across of how to deal with a snake bite.

  • Very Good blog but a bit more informative and the scientific terms are little bit hard for the general audience. But overall it is a great job!

  • Hi Giorgio,

    Your writing style is very engaging and you seem to have covered everything. The only thing I would a add is reducing the text as there is too much information.

  • Hi Giorgio,
    you have good content and coverage of the topic, some comments:
    1) it is generally well written, however there is a lot of text. this needs to be reduced, try conveying information visually through diagrams, images and even things like dot points to break up large chunks of text.
    2) you possibly have too much writing because there are some areas on the first page which do not need to be covered by your topic. Explaining what snake venom does to your body can be summarised in a much quicker way than the paragraph on the first page, which takes up a lot of room and focus.
    3) images used also need to have citations

  • Great blog! I cannot say much, except that you could try to shorten the written text passages a bit and take bigger letters instead. Some of the scientific jargon could be explained easier e.g. neurotoxins, myotoxins. And you should definitely explain the lymphatic system. I really like your text “You have completed first aid. Now what? Will I survive?”, there you explain everything very simple e.g. antibody. The only thing is antibodies are not only developed from horses. This could be misunderstood. I would highlight your summary part.
    Apart from these little things, I really liked to read your blog, good job!

  • Covered the content surrounding snake bites, however I don’t think you’re writing for the right audience. There is a lot of scientific jargon and explanation that might not be understood by the general public.

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